What's going on with JANE DOE?
JANE is undergoing some radical surgery right now. The finished draft is near perfect, but I still don't like the opening chapter. The GUTGAA pitches and comments convinced me that - while the roach scene is accurate - it's not the best opening possible. After reading this weekend I'm forced to agree.
I liked that roach scene, darnit! But it's moved now.
However, I didn't change it for the GUTGAA agent pitches. I did fix up the query with the help of the fabulous Misa Buckley (she writes SFR and Steampunk romance - I'm sure you've read all her books - right?). Go check out the new query on the Hanging On to Wonder blog and tell me what you think.
For those who are eagerly awaiting Tabitha's book, EVERY HERO NEEDS A VILLAIN, things are looking very good. As a teaser, I'll be putting up lines from EHNAV on Twitter this week. Look for the hashtag #WIPfire.